Thứ Sáu, 13 tháng 11, 2009
My First Safari
It's long time ago, I have been to Ha Long bay. It's my first journey. I have gone on the passenger car to Ha Long bay with my family. The passenger has stopped at Ha Long seaport. We have gone by the boat to go to Thien Cung cave. It's the most wonderful grotto I seen before. It has alot of stalactites and the sun's light illuminate into the cave. They made a legend world. Next, we have a delicours lunch on th ship with scad. It was a best day ever.
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Hey! Why do you delete the new postcard
Trả lờiXóaBao! I saw a postcard that you wrote last Thursday but it is not here now. I didn't know what it was about. Did you give your password to your friend to write on our blog? If you did, I think you have made a terrible mistake. I don't want you to do that. OK?
Trả lờiXóaYou have some mistakes in your writing about your first safari. We don't use "Present Perfect" to talk about things happened in the past.
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